Here is another great piece of writing.
Zoom! Sprinting past the other runners like a lightning bolt. 3 more laps to go around the track. Worrying that the other players would pass. My face sweating hard, I can taste my hot sweat. "Campbell has won the race!" The speaker said. The crowd went wild. My heart racing, I felt so impressed.
By Campbell.
A very exciting piece of writing Campbell!
ReplyDeletewow campbell i love your piece of writing
ReplyDeleteThat is pretty cool Cambell
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